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Inevitable.

with an X on my hand
and three letters on my wrist,
i took his.

he gave me a ring,
slowly placed it on my finger
and my finger down his throat
to taste my love.

and as it turns out,
in the end, i will leave him
with my last name.

he blindfolded me,
twirled me in circles
and in doing this,
i lost more than just my sense of direction.

what do you think? any thoughts, questions, comments, observations, critiques, etc. are greatly appreciated.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 4
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    JEEZ!!UHMM..

    Wow, the visual border on mind blowing! excellent word play..damn..you're good lady..