Goodbye cruel world
Goodbye too late
Goodbye my friends
and the ones I hate.
Goodbye my family
Goodbye my job
Goodbye my future
from the floor where I sob.
Goodbye to you
Goodbye you see
Goodbye to God
for spitting on me.
Goodbye to love
Goodbye to pain
Goodbye to sorrow
I've dodge my last train.
Goodbye to time
Goodbye today
Goodbye to Earth
Hell is where I now stay.
Please tell me what you think
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Sounds so much like you were suffering a little bit of heartache at the time you wrote this. Goodbye cruel world....actually, the world is rather pleasant, it is just some silly people that make it seem so bad and sad. I do hope you are feeling a bit better now. This had great abruptness to it and read very well indeed. Your very first verse really set the rhythm for this and it flowed perfect from them on. I loved it.
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