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Appealing

You're the sight before dawn,
You are light in the fog.
You're the smell after a storm,
You are the reason I was born.
You've the most satisfying taste,
You are a long good-bye embrace.
Your sound is a purposeful instrument,
You are the criminal with good intent.
You feel exhilirating and endless,
You are the very reason I wrote this.

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Why does every attempt I make at love always sound cliche?

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  • I wouldn't call it cliche at all. (:
    There were a few lines that really stood out. Set it appart.

    "Your sound is a purposeful instrument,"
    "You are the criminal with good intent."

    This is my favorite you've let me read so far. (:

    Welcome to AP Lex.
    Glad you took my advice. <3


    Nicky~