colors
burst
everywhere
petrifying
this
heart
grey
reappears
feeling
numb
"A good comment is 10% inspiration, 15% perspiration, and 75% desperation"
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A good comment is 100% hoodwinking the reader, lol. Sorry, I had to.
Lets start the hooding, lol:
When you state, "petrifying" that is intriguing because it seems a contrast to the colors...so I know you mean those bursts a little differently than I may see it in my own thoughts. So the colors bursting but then dissipate, leaving the gray and numbing. Certainly sad, certainly understandable...I've had some bursts recently, though they have pretty much petered out.
"Gray reappears"
How sad for it suggests that it is the norm, not the exception.
I am lucky, colors burst but they do not petrify my heart...just stings the heck out of it and makes it shy to take the plunge again.
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I really liked this, you said so much within 10 words, I could never do that.
Great job, keep it up.
Take care
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Second line "bursts" should be "burst" m'love
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I love the ending, the feeling given to the colours. you have used very little words to say so much and ooo I just realised the background sparkles, awesome. Great write.
Laura
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aw wow a brilant take on the image promt god luck in thecontest I love the backgroundmaralisa
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An excedllent take on the picture! I think you expressed it really well!
Gaylene
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creatively expressed... x
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For ten words you sure capture alot in a little. I love the line - grey reappears feeling numb - such truth. Wish you luck!
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Very strong and moving...deep words of emotions...night and day to create beauty in brevity...nicely done.
Best to you!
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Beautiful sweetheart, see I knew it would be great, sometimes the short ones are the most challenging. Best to you in this contest
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