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Soul's Echo

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Soul’s Echo

 

Shifting souls, as breezes sway to and fro,

invasions of teardrops sink sanity

Legitimate hearts, never depart foes,

even through pinnacles of tragedy.

 

Indigo dreams fill eyes isolated,

still there’s remnants of hope in harmony

As raindrops fall partially sedated,

may unknown tongues pray in their unity.

 

Wet words resemble poetry droplets,

to dampen one’s pupils, once liquid dry

Art weaves quintessence behind silhouettes,

where sweet souls soar, through a rainbow’s soft sigh.

 

Many lonely face, lasting storms of rage,

ghosts of haunting pasts, love will turn pang’s page.

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Artist: Marta Dahlig’s


Painting Name: Umbrella Sky


http://features.cgsociety.org/story_custom.php?story_id=4299

 

Hope ya like this one Lonely. Wink

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  • SeptemberFaith
    February 11

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    I think that this is lovely.
    "Wet words resemble poetry droplets" I think those words are beautiful.

    Criss


  • albymyheart gold member
    January 27

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    Beautiful expressions of love in your write. It has a melody of it's own. Well done...alby


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    January 27

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    I must confess your words are an inspiration within themselves. Very heartwarming and touching piece. Enjoyed the read!


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 27

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    Simply Stunning, the entire write has the feel of candles, soft music and satin sheets.
    A write that would surely melt any heart
    AWESOME !!

  • tara wilson gold member
    January 27
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    a wonderful sonnet, Tim

  • imahealer
    January 27

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    If it is love you want, you got it! Not only is your verse repleat with imagery and incredible imagery, but your word choice, using alliteration just rolls off ones tongue. "Wet words..." Such an amazing description.
    Meter and rhyme are incredibly good.Your imageries are some of my favorite happy and peaceful refuges.
    Peace and love,
    Linda


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 27

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    Wonderful

    Wonderful flow of words. Pen to paper and your poam came off like a hitch. What a wonderful poem. Really enjoyed reading your poem.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 27

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    SUPERB!!!

    My friend, with the golden pen..I don't really know where to start, gosh the sentiment was flatout beautiful, and you're rhyme was flawless, and flow was fluid..good god my man, how do you do it!?
    i'm bookmarking this!

  • Some bold phrasing here. I like, "As raindrops fall partially sedated,/may unknown tongues pray in their unity."


  • poeticpieces
    January 27

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    Brillinat!

    You sure know how to captivate your readers!
    I love this one dad, thanks so much for sharing!
    All the best in the contest, you got this!

    Timothy Jr.


  • Angelflower
    January 27

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    This was really beautiful.. The imagery was just sigh worthy .. you have a talent for making the reader sigh over beauty I believe.. Thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Poesing
    January 26

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    Beautiful. Love the last line especially. Also like may unknown tongues pray in their unity. - wow - if only, you know?


  • AsIThink gold member
    January 26

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    This had a great flow and was soaked in a poetic reflection-pool. Great thoughts put down on cyberscript...a nice weaving in my view. Terrific closing also:

    "Many lonely face, lasting storms of rage,
    ghosts of haunting pasts, love will turn pang’s page."

    AsIThink...


  • Melba Solis-Z
    January 26

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    The title caught my eye, your poem is beautiful, and the background is lovely. Good luck in the contest!


  • echo-ink
    January 26

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    Beautiful imagery, such lovely sentiments, and the background is so beautiful, goes so well with the poem.


  • nobumagawaX
    January 26
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    verry BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! dude this sounds like A-GOLD-WINNER!!!


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 26

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    wow deep and filled with emotional and profound imagery - not sure why but it brings me to tears and the background is incredible. well done and many loving blessings always xxxxx love you xxxxxx


  • Denerica
    January 26
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    Simply beautiful and how it ends. Well written once again...makes anyone melt. Blessings.


  • Lonely
    January 26

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    This is absolitely awesome hunny.. I loved, totally loved the line "as raindrops fall partially sedated" and the words like drops.. I love the imagery, the imagies you create. you always do that so much, you create such image in front of my eyes, and I get lost in your world, your beautiful world! Loved this one hubby

    Love ya always
    Wifey


  • EeyoreUK
    January 26

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    wow, im lost for words. you have a great talent my friend and I thank you for sharing it. Best of luck in the contest.

  • i think she will this read like a mixture of romance and def which gives this the best writing trend on market you are getting to be more than the best and believe me i enjoy every bit of it mushy this def with this sensual romantic style is a style that will go well with you just keep doing it

    Jewels


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    January 26

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    Wet words resemble poetry droplets,
    to dampen one’s pupils, once liquid dry

    I like how you gather beautiful words into rhyme
    just like in these lines...those two are already
    poetry

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