I won't fly:
You'd be gone
When I came back.
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
480 points, ended January 26, 2009, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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How often we must have trimmed our wings for the sake of another's company, I suppose. This is a tender piece, Lita, one much deserving of the bronze trophy you received. Well done, Scribe. 
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Beautiful picture. And the poem is simply amazing, beautiful, and touches your emotions.
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Oh! This is good! You have condensed your thoughts, said all you need to say and it is sooooo apt for the picture. You have read her expression very well I think. Congrats on the bronze...alby
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Thank you so much for stopping by -- it always does my heart good to see your name! And thank you for your comments -- this is a really great picture to think about, isn't it! Lita
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This is full of meaning!.. x
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oh my..
this is exceptional!!wow it's short but packs a whallop!
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Thank you so much! I'm working on being more concise (lol, that'll be the day!)
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