I'm Watching you walk through that door
so much pain
so many tears , i think im drowning
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This is the very beginning of a song , so thats why its only three lines
What did you think
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I really like the beginning so far so good:] If you keep going im Pretty positive that it will be fantastic:] cant wait to see more!!!
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I like this,
It kinda reminds me of...how do you say it...hmmm...
(hope you understand this)
Divorcee ending relationships, troubled relationships, and a few more...
It also reminds me very odly of my brother....
Very good
Hope to read more of it when you add on!
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