Compassion flows from teardrop eyes,
Sheltering me from crashing wave
Weaving me silent lullabies,
Saving me from shadowy grave.
Breath to breathe, before I crumble,
planting soil of friendship's seed
Angel soaring, high, but humble,
as I proudly follow her lead.
So many care when it's to late,
but she's a soul who bestows love
Way before a human heart's fate,
you'll know you was always thought of.
She's an example of true kin,
as she shares and cares from within.
Author notes
Love ya sis. http://allpoetry.com/Stardust-luvr
A contest entry
- Three Years and Counting by StormGoddess.
875 points, ended January 30, 2009, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Such a terrific write. So very well done. Congrats on the bronze.
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Congrats my sweet dearheart my dear bro on your shiny bronze but know you are and always will be GOLDEN within my heart - love you always and more xxxx YES!! the tears are flowing once again xxxxx
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Love ya sis!
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Timothy, this is simply beautiful. This woman, who faces enough of her own fears and worries, is always there for a friend, offering them a shoulder to cry on or a much needed lift of hope. She is truly unselfish and full of love. Wonderful writing for a dear woman.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
just beautiful....
i sort of wish i had written it for my sister!
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..i love the lines," Breath to breathe, before I crumble, planting soil of friendship's seed,"...as though your very self were the garden which nourished the friendship...lovely image
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Very smooth rhyme here. It flows very well and the sentiment is quite touching.
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Precious words spoken with true admiration. Magnificent write!
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Precious Dad!
She so deserves this, much love Aunt Star~
Thanks for sharing your loving ways, always!
-Tim Jr.
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Beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. Gorgeous flow and images.
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Precious!!
Aaaaaaaaaw this is one Treasure of a piece penned and for a Gem to You and many others
Wowzers Timothy~ Powerful piece that tugs at the Heartstrings
also swells the eyes~ Beauty this is for a Beauty my Friend!! Woot
Love the words: teardrop eyes
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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You captured my soul-sis quite well in here! She truly is a god send!
I love this dedication to her! I love her as much as you do, and for the very same reasons! She has touched my heart with love and friendship, so deeply, so honestly, helping me in some of the darkest times.
Thanks for writing this for her! She deserves every bit of happiness she can find! She truly is an amazing person!
and love
Nyetta
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thank you with love always xxx
my dearest you too have been here for me heart and soul more times than I can imagine - you have often lifted me up from my multi shades of blue erasing tears of disharmony and shining your rainbow of light upon me. I am crying for i love you just as much in return and your words touch my soul with the magic of you and our everlasting friendship and family unity, you mean so much to me much love and many hugssss always xxxxxx many blessings always xxxxx
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