Not of this earth
among the stars,
flying on a spaceship
headed to Mars
and I'm going crazy, yeah
with Space Dementia.
Aliens may live
somewhere out there
it boggles my mind
a cray affair
and I'm going crazy, yeah
with Space Dementia.
I'm losing my mind
among all this space
I've lost all hope
for the human race
and I'm going crazy, yeah
with Space Dementia.
Gravity is wacky
up may be down
my mind in my head
is bouncing around
and I'm going crazy, yeah
with Space Dementia.
I'll never get home
free from trouble and strife
to fly among galaxies
all of my life
but I'm going crazy, yeah
with Space Dementia.
Author notes
Option 1. Song
A contest entry
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Comments
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Very intense and interesting.
A little funny too. But it makes me think, most definately! -
slightly humurous
i would have preferred a more serious poem but thankyou for the entry


