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Love

I hate
me.
I hate
you.

What silly, lonely words
Of unrequited love

I miss
us.

Author notes

Inspired by Emerald Oblivion. Again.

(She's so cool ^-^)

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  • The FaeQueen
    January 27
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    The simplicity of the poem gives it much meaning!
    Nice work
    Thank you!


  • StarIlluminated
    January 26

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    This is great! It's so short but so powerful and meaningful. Great job and keep writing!

    *KT*


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 26
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    Made me think !
    short and to the point
    Love it!
    Best wishes
    Julie