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Love

I am in love
yes it is true.
My purpose in life
is to help people...
He needs help...
it makes sense to love him
then...
doesn't it?

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  • LipMedex
    January 29, 2009

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    Hey! I haven't been around in a while it seems, but I just stopped by to say hello, and since this was your newest poem...
    I'm glad you're not hurting in such a department like love anymore, and I'm glad you have someone.
    Good write and Best wishes, Ally


  • Guerrero
    January 26, 2009
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    Its short simple and is good. Nice write.