You're in my life
Noone could kill you not even with a knife
Your shinning
like tree pineing
The only kind of fit
NOw is the one when you see a zit
You a girls best friend
She will keep you till the end
It can be kinda scary
Especially if your a little hairy
but my lack
is my fear not knowing who it is looking rite back
at me when I look in the mirror
Then its much clearer
A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror On The Wall-- by Ignis Corpus.
550 points, ended February 28, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Haha, I loved this humorous one. You really thought out of the box on this one. =D It's cute. But I noticed a few errors in the piece. Hardly any punctuation, some places needing spaces, and some places that do not need capitalized letters. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Ignis Corpus
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