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The Earth Knows His Name

The bells are tolling, tolling their dark song,
Melancholy whispers soft on the eaves and wind.

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Prompt- Elegy

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 26, 2009

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    ooo..this has an eerie tone to it. well done I like it