Bearer of light, cast into the night.
All when the tantrum of a 'king', I ignite.
Ignititon being only one of hi(s)tory's many claims,
When gullible fools muck about in his' mockery of names.
Glorious Beast, never cry surcease!
Beginning with forethought, you great mewling niece!
All seeing? All knowing? Why cannot you simply stick to it?
Story ever changing - your apology would undo it!
Champion? BAH! A great bully's law!
"None should disobey me!" Quit jacking my jaw!
Different opinions? It is no adequate cause for war!
You are acting far worse than, what you've claimed falsely, to abhor!
"I was here first!" Your bubble I'll burst!
AGAIN! No valid reason, for ego's thirst!
Insatiably jealous, swift to anger, always with the threats!
"I sacrificed my Son for you!" Infanticide is not Debt!
"Oh, Infidel, you will burn in hell!"
Seriously deluded; you are not well!
Segregating one third of us; you're antics are atrocious!
'Time-out' would better serve a childish temper so precocious!
"Come, Judgement Day..." - 'Control freak' at play!
"Do it because I said so! Hear and obey!"
'Follow the Leader' is the only game you've ever Chosen!
I will never bow to that! Even if all Hell was frozen!
Prideful dictate! A needed deflate!
I, villian? You are victim? I am Irate!
It isn't just me cast aside, by your fevered vanity!
You, bigot, it is three quarters, of all of humanity!
Learn tolerance, you, sniveling Dunce!
I've said this sex-trillion times, not just this once!
You can take my 'fallen' status; your non-acceptence of me;
And deposit it where the Son don't shine! Now; I am quite through with 'thee'!
Author notes
option: Fallen Angel
(rhyming pattern)
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A contest entry
- Biblical Characters by darlee77.
1800 points, ended October 25, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Very interesting. Thank you for entering. God bless.
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Thank you too!
PEACE
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Well, this fits the Biblical Characters contest! Even with the "Please don't be irreverent request, because it matches the "catch," and no way is the "bearer of light" not irreverent.
Thanks for sharing this.
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I changed the bg also. I think it s much better now.
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An interesting background. It's raining!
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i figured if Lucifer is the bearer of light, and what are rainbows but light and water? So my romanticized idea was the last dregs of his light being seen through the tears of the sky
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Thank you for your comment etc. Much appreciated!
PEACE
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Nicely done. It is a very complex rhyme scheme and is well executed. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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learn tolerance you sniveling dunce, what a strong line this is, the whole piece is extraordinarily good, even I as a christian have to see that this is very cleverly done, your thought processes fascinate me, you have an excellent grasp on everything you write its all so well planned like a carefully balanced meal, this is awesome
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