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[ I want to burn heaven down ]

I want to burn heaven down
Turn golden streets into molten rubble
peaceful nights into nightmare scenes
blue skies into a smoky deceleration of war against god
making sure he knows I am taking no prisoners
I will hang every angel with their own hypocritical halos
after ripping out every single feather of their wings
I will slit Christ's throat in front of mother and father
drink his blood
but not for redemption of any kind
just to spit it in gods face after he gives into my demand
that you may live forever
so you may be remembered properly
immortalized in a way my words can never achieve

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  • BehindTheShadow
    January 26
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    Great piece!


  • righteousme
    January 26

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    just to spit it in gods face after he gives into my demand
    that you may live forever ...
    when fighting angels and demons alike ... none are as cruel as the ones who take away the one you love ...

    brilliant!!!!

  • wow

    fucking love the strength your write has... 'i want' - what a demand.. especially enjoy'd the bit about slitting Christs' throat.

    "I will slit Christ's throat in front of mother and father
    drink his blood
    but not for redemption of any kind"

    totally inspiration you are. good job, what a job well done.. this is massively manic explanation of getting that heaven and getting that death and boom.. there't goes

    adios ad' xx


  • Heroesrox
    January 25

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    In the beginning of the piece, I kept thinking this is really good. Then, I got to the end. The ending makes me think of fighting for a person who is deceased, and I loved that. This was one of the best pieces I have read in a long time!
    this so much!