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Hmm...?

Laying here,
listening to the gentle breeze...
By this large tree near,
hearing wind blowing against the leaves resting besides me...
Thinking freedom...
To really believe...

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Oh lovely imagery here completes the atmosphere of serenity that your poem creates. Love your presentation and the message delivered i nthe ending

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