You held my hand and nursed me to health
When I was afraid; when I was submissive
But I think for myself now, so you leave?
Should I be made to think you care...
About the rose reborn?
Of course not.
So now I'm scared again, submissive
Author notes
To the contest creator:
I don't think this is what you were looking for. However, it is over 30 and under 80 words.
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I hope you like it!
A contest entry
- 30-80 Beautiful Words please.... by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended February 1, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tis Late. Comments, as always, appreciated
Comments
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Ahh now this reads of feeling powerless but then foresaken when power is taken from another.. only to find that frightening and submitting to someone elses control again. I have been there! Great write.
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SHOCK! You entered the contest too!
This is really pretty. Especially the last line...and the first line...and the middle lines...
Of course this is what Kiwi was looking for...because she wasn't looking for anything.
May the best John Adams win! (Good luck)
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