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Anything But This

Love?
So be it.

Hate?
I can take it.

Fury?
Let me have it.

Just don't make me live...
  ...With the guilt.

Don't crumble my resistance.
Don't shatter my mind.

Anything different.
Anything but this.

Don't leave me.
Not because of this.
Not now.

I can handle the world.
I can bear the universe.

But I can't live through one second
With this.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 1

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    The gamut of emotions run in this! I've been there for sure where I've said "anything but this..."
    Poignant write!


  • StarIlluminated
    January 26

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    Wow Katrina, this is a really really really good poem. It flows so well and is really great in general. Keep up the writing!

    *KT*

    P.S. How many contests are you entered in right now? It's gotta be like, 20 or more...


    • liduen silver member
      January 26
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      Erm...a lot? I go contest crazy

      Thanks for the comment!

  • Beautiful!

    i can't think of any other words to say....
    you've left me in awe
    lol
    keep writing,
    Annie Shadows