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Darkness rises

When darkness rises,
tears shall fall,
cause you know,
something is behind the wall.

Up to the wall you put your ear.
You try to listen,but not to near.
It could be a druggy.it could be a creep.
It could be a killer or it could be a theif.

The closer you get the more you hear.
but dont get to close,he could have a spear.
Against the wall you hear breathing.
Your heart beats quickly,
your mind is decieving.

Wait!
It suddenly became quiet.
What going on?
Somthing is wrong.

Moments pass.
You give up,
you turn around...

and their he is,
a killer.
Next thing you no,
you dont no anything.

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  • XxXEmoXor
    January 25
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    WOW me and my BF both like this its awsome