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Mysterious

Somethings lurking very near,
hopefully it wont come here.
Feel the sickness deep inside,
as the guilt it shall try.

Get me a bucket,
get me a pail.
What ever keeps me from feeling like hell.

Make the feeling go away.
Make the stranger disappear.
Make me feel safe and secure.

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  • Sunkissed xo
    January 31

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    This is really mesmerizing. So very mysterious.. it leaves you thinking.
    Thanks for entering my contest. Best of luck

  • Interesting poem, its stealing yet nerve racking with its cloak of shadows. Hidden well and leaving the reader to decide the outcome and the monster inside. Great write.

    Sincerely,
    XxDragonWolfxX