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crawling milked dew by drooling doldrums

daddy can read in right light
and newborn sees unblind by embraceable span
so by breastfeeding lens
with heartbeat of beginning
opens up so much as mouth of mamma

if my serenity gets nervous
may I not be sobbingly scribblling
pulling down ripe fruit down bark
but cite what's straight
not just somebody made the tree
nor family to be rooted

I can't cut around to myself
when pregnant , as there's no art but to artery
destructively described
instead of a breath of fresh air
for motto isn't advancement
that can transition to extend
so doesn't have to be short
but baby grow by zinc twice as good
when not never but now wonderful with more like kernel
that's richer than awareness tear
watery but not as unwrapping weeping love
what is made to be  peeled or not with calling not to hide
introduction untripped knowledge conflict faith taught without empty rhyme

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  • A thought provoking work indeed ..very much thankful I am to you for the entry in this contest...well done indeed..