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Us

I love saying “us”.
I love being able to.

I love how us
Minus me
Equals you.

I love you.

I love what US
Could stand for
Not United States
But United Souls.

I love us.

I love you.

I love what happened to make us.

Author notes

I know I haven't been on AllPoetry for a while (AllJournal has captivated me) so here's a shitty romance poem cos there isn't already enough of this shit spamming up the world.

How cheesy is this?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • DeadlyTurnip
    January 25, 2009

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    Really cheesy.

    That being said, I like really cheesy poems! I tried to read this to Molly but she wouldn't let me. Lol

    I really like this poem a lot. (But you knew that)