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The other side of life

Swirling limitless uncertainty,
Death like a chasm yawns invitingly,
to explore and tingle with unfelt sensation.

Meet me there.

A contest entry

Please read and comment.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Antebellum
    July 5, 2009
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    wow very powerful

    thanks for entering.
    good luck


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 15, 2009
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    too short....

    disqualified


  • wildflower. gold member
    February 1, 2009
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    Judged-ola!

    creative piece, i really like this...


  • StarEyes
    January 29, 2009

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    WOW! What a great read this one is! Very Powerful! I reallly enjoyed this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 26, 2009
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    the last 3 words in your poem is very powerful

    great write! I really like it




  • obatala
    January 25, 2009
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    Please try to finish this tonight.

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