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Drugs

Missing image
Poison injected into my
veins, the pill melting into
a new journey in my mind
I can't breathe or blink
without the feeling in
my system these days.
I hide away in the shadows
so no one will see the scars
I make, and hide
my true identity from the world.
Though I know my life has
changed and is in a constant
spiral to doom
I still live in this filth,
because it brings me relief
from pain that haunts me constantly.
The intoxication takes over
and I fly among my
fantasies and leave this
world of cruel reality.
Not knowing if I'll ever
wake up from this disforia
I still ride the high,
not caring whether I live
to breathe or blink another day.

_lost is the mind of the person whose soul is sold to poisonous intoxication.

Author notes

1) DRUGS

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Anyone who knows me knows I hate drugs, and that theyve scarred me for life by taking hold of people i've loved.

♥ Kathraina

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  • jayyniecakes.
    February 11
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    it really fits the picture very well,

    BUT

    i think that the lines are too short.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 28

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    You show such promise, luv....and this write is no exception...How quickly your are showing your talent as a writer, and in this write...you have deeply expressed the characterization of a girl held captive with addiction... Your own experience has helped you... write...Aunty Rosemary


  • Rhythm Child
    January 26

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    its sad how they do change the people they are taken by
    but thanks for the entry

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 25

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    wow, excellently penned, sometimes fantasy is so much easier than life but life intrudes at some point. Beautifully written sister


  • Emerald-Eyes
    January 25

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    This is a really powerful piece and beautifully written. I love the description in it, the images of it ruining a persons life.
    Well done.

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