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Savage Hunger

Passion burning so intense we can not ignore,
feeling your naked flesh against mine
as we give in to the desire which we feel.
Tasting your flesh astounds me so,
bringing forth such yearning never felt before.
Listening to your soft moans
as my fingers and tongue
awaken your senses.
Wanting to please you
in every way that I can,
as we show the affection
that we hold within our heart for each other.
Lips meet in a passionate kiss,
no longer able to hold back the longing that we feel.
Your back against my chest,
as you ask me to fulfill your desire
to feed the hunger we both feel inside.
Our bodies join as one,
riding savagely to the rhythm
of our rapid beating hearts.
Friction burning us with such pleasure,
we are one now
one flesh, one soul, one heart
embracing the pleasure that we feel for each other.
Oh my Lady, my Love,
let us cherish all that we are feeling
and not let this sensation end to quickly.
Riding the crest of this wave of passion,
showing our love so tenderly,
while we feed this savage hunger
we have for one another
that we know can never be satisfied for too long.

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  • enriqued89
    January 28
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    Enriqued89

    Incredibly passionate! The desire and need in your tone was seductive....very very nice!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 27

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    Very passionate piece you've got here. I could feel every word. Well done! Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!


  • onesugar gold member
    January 26

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    A beautiful passionate sensual write that was a pleasure to read.
    Best of luck in the contest
    ~sugar~

  • liltxgirl
    January 26
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    very nice and sentual


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    January 25
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    Very nice...sensual and tender...passionate and sweet. Thank you so much for the entry.

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