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I'm Broken

 

 

 

Hello,
Good-bye.
Time's short,
no end,
no origin.

constant
aspect


Nothing matters,
we don't understand -
the hallucinations are us...

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Elegy

No rhyme.
19 words.

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Jazzlyn
    May 3
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    love the backround and i enjoyed this short and straight to the point


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 26

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    "we don't understand the hallucinations are us"

    awesome line!

    great write, I really enjoyed this one