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My Stupid Prayer

I prayed so hard every night
Just for him to be happy
Foolishly i said,
"If he was happy so was I
"whether it be me or someone else
"who brought him this joy"

It was a stupid prayer
I should not have said
Because God brought him her
To have in my stead

I don't want her to touch him
I don't want her to hold him
I don't want her to kiss him
I don't want her to love him

But then I look back and so happy he is
She'll never love him as much as me
But then again, still...

Nobody ever can

And nobody ever will

Author notes

he was a jerk but then again i also thought he was perfect *shrugs* oh well ^^

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  • bluewho
    January 26

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    Wow, you can really feel how torn you are. It's so hard to see someone move on. Very nice and meaningfull write. Good Job


    • Cbc
      January 26
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      thank you! i rely appreciate the compliment! ^^ <3 thanks for taking the time out to read it <3


  • August Starlight silver member
    January 25

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    AMAZING.
    So simple but true; I fear I'll feel this when my ex gets a new girl.
    Thanks for entering my contest.


    • Cbc
      January 25
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      yeah ik the feeling =.=; and thank you for the compliment i rely appreciate the comment ^^ <3

  • Bob Fox
    January 25

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    Young poet

    the young heart looks at love in a different way. Itseems so fatal when we departs but in the end it can be a great tool to learn from for the lovers to come.


    • Cbc
      January 25
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      mhmm i agree ^^ thank you so much for the comment i truly appreciate it! <3

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