I try to take things day by day
but he leaves me here,
what am I supposed to say
when falling from my soul is a single tear?
I've loved him for so long
but he remains blind to my feelings
and I try to stay strong
but I can't handle all these dealings.
I try wander in his path
but he won't meet my eye
speeding by with a look of wrath
and leaving me wishing I would just die.
Why will he not love me
why am I not good enough;
what does he want me to be
funny, loving, tough?
I'll be anything for him
I wish he could see that
but my future with him looks dim,
because today on my heart he openly spat.
Author notes
Uhh...I've been there...plenty of times, that I don't care to think about too much lolz 
♥ Kathraina
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soo....whats your honest opinion?
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Well this was a overall good poem... There was times when there was a little forced rhymeing and made it lose power... But very good job!!! Keep up the great work!
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Bravo!
It flowed with emotion and a reaching out, all I know is he is a fool...you are a winner! Blessings.
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sad but true
we have all walked this path before
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awww that is so sad. *cuddles* have faith sis. You are such a lovely and beautiful person. If he can't see that than he is blind
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Been there as well, don't want to go back.
Great poem, especially the ending. Interesting word choice I must say.
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Thanks!
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wow, I think this is really beautiful.
I've been there to and it is true, it really sucks.
Good luck in the contest
xx
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