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Her Eyes

Her pretty gaze covets my demise

 

Yet i am drawn to her

Like a vacuum in the skies.

 

A hopeless romantic

In love with nail polished lies,

 

Sown into the dreams

Of codependent screams

 

Drowning in her eyes

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    January 31

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    Ah..really wonderful scenario and the immages you created to bring the message of the life ..love it..thanks for sharing such a dep poetry..well done..


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 25
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    pretty tiger


  • August Starlight silver member
    January 25

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    Wow.
    I am speechless so.. I really dunno what to say.
    Thanks for entering my contest, though.