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Moment We Share

So alluring within the sight of your beauty,
feeling this yearning desire consume me.
The smooth sultry curves of your flesh,
astounds me so
as I am captivated by your seduction.
Then desire released within a kiss,
flesh against flesh
as my hands move like tiny explorers
over the softness of your body.
Kisses grow deeper,
as each touch arouses us so much,
burning within the flames of our desire.
My lips caressing your breast,
tasting your flesh
as the pleasure between us
grows ever stronger.
Till finally we can not take much more,
and our bodies join as one
moving to the rhythm
of our heartbeat.
Friction so intense
that it melts our flesh into one,
two hearts beating for one soul.
Sweet ecstasy we found,
within this night of pleasure
and love.

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  • geckogirl
    January 25, 2009
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    Thanks for taking the time to apply for the position advertised, which was received with intense passion. All CV’s will be reviewed & judged after February 1st. The three final successful applicants will be notified by email. Commencement date to be advised.
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  • glwstckrave
    January 25, 2009
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    beautiful.


  • abybaby
    January 25, 2009
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    a mesmerizing poem.....the words are so intense that it bound me to d writing........cheers