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Staring into heaven

Here I am.
My eyes open.
Where I am,
Who knows.
All I know
is that I was dead
And now I am staring
Into heaven.

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contest based on this picture Fallen From Grace " http://www.flickr.com/photos/rachaelsphotos/3003113011/ " had to write a poem in 26 words on what it was about. This is my interpretation.

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Such an abstract concept to choose, a truly unique take on the prompt picture. Love the brevity of each line - combining to deliver a powerful meaning.

    Thank you for you entry