As time goes by
I realize how little I've meant to you
you take me for granted
and I keep going back for more
I'm such a fool
This time it will be different
my heart is set
on letting go
this time I will not fall
I am done being your last call.
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I know that it's not a very good poem if it is considered one. I just needed to clear my head.
Please tell me what you think
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That is what writing is all about. Clearing your head!
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So True!!!
I can so relate to these words you have penned. . It is so hard to let go completely and never look back. I am glad you found the strength my friend.
I am still searching and trying to move on and leave the pain behind. Hugs to you. Always, Sandy 
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Bravo !
I love honest writes and those who are happy to voice their inner most feelings
We have all been that fool in life
But now you smile again...
Julie
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To the point,Melba! Like it hon...Keep penning!
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Oh hunny, I think every girl in the world can relate to this write, I know I can, and I wish you all the luck in the world, Take time, heal, And realize they weren't what you longed for from the beginning.
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This is a nice vent. I hope this truly was cathartic for you. I sure have written enough poems like this and for similar reasons in my short life so I understand your need to clear your mind. Writing a poem was always my preferred method as I could never be open enough or confident enough to share my feelings with another person. I could never even have the balls to share them with strangers. Hope it worked.
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