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Walk Away

Many months may pass,
these feelings still last,
our bond was un-describable,
yearning you was so desirable.

The perfect friendship,
a blessed relationship,
an understanding only you and I knew,
love that separated  our reality of whats true.

You had your life and I had mine,
fate through us together at the wrong time,

Some words are best left unspoken,
as we walk away, hearts remain broken.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    August 28
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    TOUCHING!!!!

    So often in our lives we meet people who leave with us their heart and soul. Forever they will remain in our hearts. 's


  • honey bear
    January 29
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    a sad write and i agree that fate can be very cruel sometimes but then maybe we can learn from these experiences, grow strong and learn to move on for each expreience we have helps to build us into the people we are happiness is out there, you just have to reach out for it.


  • GizmoFox
    January 25

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    Nice write; I can relate to the lines "Fate through us together at the wrong time" & "Our bond was un-describable, yearning you was so desirable". It's as if you were in my head while writing this. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing!


    • angel-lover
      January 25
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      thank-you for reading my poem I am glad you could relate to my words, fate can work in some cruel ways sometimes to where we just cant make sense of it.
      take-care