I don't know where I'm going
I do not know the way,
I've lost all sense of purpose...
It's not alright,
I'm not ok,
I feel so lost and empty,
Does no-one I know care?
My cries for help just echo, echo....
Is anybody there?
It's like I'm trapped inside a box,
Without a lock or key,
There's no way to get in or out,
And no-one who
Can rescue me.
With all my friends surrounding me,
I still feel so alone,
What is it that has captured me,
That keeps me on my own,
My own?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is beautiful, but really really sad. it makes the reader wonder what put you there in the first place. and i agrees with Eggeyness about the hope part, how ur searching for it.
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It's sad and almost like you keep searching for hope in it that never comes, I hope whatever you are looking for you find. And may a smile reign upon your face.
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