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Together...

We were red like blood...
once.

We slipped deep into...
eachother.

And I told you I loved you...
thankfully.

I yelled at you more than...
I should.

You held me in your...
apologies.

We cried together in my...
selfishness.

You wanted me to love...
you.

I never could love...
you.

I am ugly in my...
disception.

I can never  love ...
another.

When I can't even love...
myself.

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  • Cannonsfire
    January 25
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    Thank you so much for a fine entry. C