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Mine?

Entering wildly
and everywhere

A tare in the silence a
growl in my darkness

Air

Hot and wavey
sipping quietly

A contest entry

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 25

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    nice take on the prompt. creatively worded. thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest. =)