The infectious beat moved my feet,
Compelled me to leave my seat,
Dancing fast I had a blast,
But the beat didn’t last.
The notes began and tears ran,
As the emotions of the song cut deep,
The words started and my lips parted,
In awe I listened as it washed over me.
A contest entry
- Pre-Written Rhyme Anyone? No Trophies by piccola.
900 points, ended January 28, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PreWrite contest for my favorites/AP family/and group!!! by Kathraina.
1055 points, ended February 15, 290 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif/round contest part one - prewrite's by serenity silvermoon.
800 points, ended July 10, 564 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Judged-ola!
haha cute write i love the flow in this! -
I can't rhyme to save my life, but you sure make it look easy! I love it! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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This is amazing brother! Flawless rhyme, and beautiful imagery. Bravo!!!
♥ Kathraina
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well done
the rhyme here is good its very smooth, i liked the simpleness of the rhyme its a tricy thing to do, write natrual with a rhyme that fits without seeming forced
well done
white
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oh this is really wonderful! the rhyme was almost flawless
bravo darlin' you really did a wonderful job, I loved the image you crafted with your words
best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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