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Rescue Me Please

This endless misery

Is burried deep in me

I've wasted all these years

Overcome by my fears

These painful memories

Eat at me like a disease

I don't know what's to come

I just hope that we're not done

Rescue me

I beg of you

Save my soul

Be my glue

Don't let me

Fall apart

Please my love

Don't break my heart

I'm chained to a land

That's eternally damned

It has made me suffer

All this pain and torture

I'm always contemplating

How I'm dying and I'm fading

Will I ever find that peace

Will I get lost among the trees

Can I find my way

Out of the forest

I am dying each day

I feel like a tourist

I need you here with me

I need you to believe

Don't need your "I'm sorry"

Don't need for you to leave

Will you only leave me broken

Abandoned alone and chokin'

Please don't you leave me baby

Will you fall from grace or save me

I'm just not sure anymore

Time to walk out the door

If you follow I will know

Otherwise just let me go

 

 

Author notes

**Special thanks to Janaschi & DeviantArt for the artwork & to my friend Kat for the lovely background**

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  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    January 25

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    Wow I like this so much its very relatable to me
    Great Write

  • michaeline
    January 25

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    I hope you are not the one suffering as I hate to see anyone suffering.This poem to me describes what I have felt and gone through.You write very well and have alot of talant.Love the pictures and the backround.The title was perfect and the words brought tears to my eyes.If this is you suffering this way to my thoughts and prayers go out to you.


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    January 25

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    wow

    great job i love it alot nothing to complain about i love all your work you are a very good poet i love it alot keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Pianokidd
    January 25
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    wow..amazing ... wow


  • Amber Lee
    January 25
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    Wow!Great write!

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