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Real Love

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Containment enticing; unsung
I am the song in his heart

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words: love, joy and happiness

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  • Riftkin gold member
    February 9
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    Thank you for this wonderful poem in only 10 words.

    Riftkin


  • RavenTheWhite
    February 6

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    Puppy Love

    what love songs.

    until the song gets old. then a new *song* comes along.

    either way. a romantic view of childhood fairy tales.

    the limit of the contest is fix to 10 words. so to engage

    the reader with a cliche of an ideal is sub par. but good

    minimalist work. the flow of unsung was a bit off in

    what i believe was the context.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 25

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    A beautiful sentiment in so few words. Touches the heart and soul of the reader.
    Much love
    Soulful Woman


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 25
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    nice, short

    to the point..nice words of romance my friend..