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Drown The Sorrow In The Light

I wonder why people fight

Can't close their eyes at night

I think it might be you

 

 

 

They're feeling so down and out

Don't know what life's about

It's all because of you

 

 

 

Envy & jealousy

Take hold of everybody

 

 

 

You shine just like the sun

You are the only one

Our dreams consumed by you

Our wishes won't come true

We lay down to drown the sorrow

Waiting for a new tomorrow

 

 

 

I ponder why we lose sight

We're blinded by your light

I know now that it's true

 

 

 

An endless life filled with hate

Can't see past our own fate
Give us a life renewed

 

 

 

You are the savior

The one we all favor

 

 

 

You're the light

You're the one

 

 

 

We all fight

For your love

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

*Special thanks to Walter Bibikow & allposters.com for the photographs & to my friend Kat for the background*

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 25
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    incredible!

    loved this powerhouse of a write my friend, good job!!


  • Vanishing-girl
    January 25
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    Really amazing

    This is such a beautiful poem. Great write!


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    January 25

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    wow

    very good write i love it i love the background for this piece i love the pictures for it 2 i love the whole thing nothing to compalin about i love how the whole thing flowed together and i love how it rhymed together i love it great job amazing write keep up the great work very beautiful write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Dargian
    January 25

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    This is a very great poem! You describe the one person as the most inportant, and put all of us in background! Was this based ony anyone?

    -Darg