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That's That.

It's fast,
Like your own eyes,
In their own reflection,
Try to catch their movements, but can't.
That fast.

Steady,
Like pollen falls,
Unseen but understood,
Appreciated but not heard.
So calm.

Painful,
Like a deep breath,
Of air so cold it burns,
An oxymoron holding truth.
Nonsense.

That's life.
A puff of smoke.
A ball of snow in Spring.
A jar to be filled with pennies.
There there...

Stay calm.
You'll be just fine.

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  • piccola silver member
    January 28
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    nicely done. thank you for entering. I'll say more when my keyboard is fixed and I can type.