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On Monday, they took her through emergency
On Tuesday, she forgot her name
Come on Doctor, just a little more shock therapy,
and some Lidocaine.
If you dare to bare a child
Keep it safe, and tame the wild
Give it food to help it grow
Add your breath when candles glow
If you turn and leave it there
No more hand stokes brush the hair
No more sharing each other’s air
No more stories will you share.
When the witches dance, they dance around the sharp stones
Until the moon is full, you can’t resist their wicked pull
Enticing you to dance, with them around the sharp stones
Could this be our last chance to grow the seeds that we have sown.
I’m turning on this axis point
I twisted up a tainted joint
Now I’m seated all alone
I cannot think, I only moan
He is swine, and she’s his sow
Paradise is where they left me
Surrounded by a beauty I could never see
Let me be, I’d rather be alone.
When the witches dance, they dance around the sharp stones
Until the moon is full, you can’t resist their wicked pull
Enticing you to dance, with them around the sharp stones
Could this be our last chance to grow the seeds that we have sown.
[Bridge]
I can see straight through your mind
Are you repulsed by your own kind?
You can run, but you can’t hide, from me
I will find and put an end to you.
And it isn't for what you put me through
Because all along I always knew
It was either you or me.
REPEAT
CHORUS
IMPROV.
(Middle finger tequila shot bonus prizes
back on the tour bus, next stop, grand canyon)
Buy the album
allpoetry.com/list/3198
independentartistscompany.com/songs.aspx?SongID=4478&ArtistID=9993
And immediately shove it up
an Internet whore's ass, any
hack erotic writer wannabe
poet will do, there's about
a thousand here.
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Art donated by Ed Peterson
by some unknown artist
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Written February 17th, 2004
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Hey
This was pretty good, not godly, but good. I felt that that some of the words that you used to ryhme were a little bit predictable. However, familiarity tends to make a good lyrics. In effect, I also shouldn't judge too harshy, for I have tried to write lyrics to music and the conclusion... well if it was successful than I probably wouldn't be on this site at 2 in the morning reviewing people's poems/lyrics.
Now I would say the lines that stick out, but that is redundant. I will tell you what i did like though. I liked the end where you launch the middle finger and head back inside the bus. After a momentary glimpse of peddling it turns to an obnoxious state that almost resonates Morrison.
good day
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I've not encountered godly.
Perhaps you can clarify?
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Coolness defined
Twisted , angry and brutal-- all those fine traits I have learned to anticipate from the old werewolf. You remind me of listening to Morisson in one ear and Dylan in the other, while trippin on some fresh peyote buttons ( right after the puking part ends and the dreamers dance starts).
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Keep writing!
This was a very unique work with a lot of good to say.
There were some spelling boobies, but it surely kept
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Well written lyrics...as a poem think it is too much! (with sing song phrases drilled in)
I liked the sonic structure and the flow. Overall a very good job!
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Interesting and wild - loved it.
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One day soon.. when I have the exra funds, I'm going tobuy some of yor albums ...til then I'll just enjoy your lyrics
And I DO enjoy them.
This one is especially expressive. And Ed's artwork is very good, goes well with the lyrics
Good work, Jeremi
Dee
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yes, this song is off my third album
allpoetry.com/list/3198
My first two albums are better though,
but I'd give this album three stars, just
because it was my first album, but released
as my third, so it has some interesting takes
and some really different songs, live,
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crystaldust 12-05-05 21:15
I don't have sound on my computor. Don't like it; don't want it. BUT I do know a brilliant lyric when I read it and this one is terrific. I've read some of your other work too and like it very much. So keep writing lyrics and I'll enjoy reading the words even if I won't hear the music. Hope that doesn't offend you, it's not meant to. -
Great lyrics! Did you actually put these to one of your songs? If so, is it available with your others? The comments above are interesting. Someone really got on your nerves, huh?
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I commend you on these beautifully lyrics.
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Good idea.
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I forgot something.
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much better. -
I got your CD, pretty cool stuff. When I first heard this song, I thought the witches were dancing around the shop stoned.
Great album, but it needed more instrumental. The music just speaks for itself sometimes.
well anyways, I'm an e-whore, so luv ya hun. Do me now. time for the obligatory flowers.
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Well sweetie
I like it and stand your ground
I mean if we don't take up for ourself who the hell else will
I love your work its different and its unique
If we all thought a like it would be a sad sad world
So you keep on going with the style I like and admire
Hoping you have a nice weekend will be back to read more soon
Hubby home after being gone all week out of town working ummmm
time to lay down and uh kiss face roflmao
Luv ya hun
You tell em
Susan~~~~
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well written
I think this is very well written. I especially like (tameing the wild for the child.) You have a deep imagination -
Great...Now that tune is gonna be stuck FOR HOURS!!!
These are beautiful lyrics...I want to hear it, too...Feel it...You so easily take me where you are with your words,Horus8...Off to read moremoremore!!! -
Keep your dog crap out of my yard.
I'm not intersted, please, quit commenting on my work,
okay, unless you want to talk about poetry or the actual poem,
I don't get it? What do you want? Me to lie and say I think you're a fantastic artist!!! Hey wow man you'll have a job at hustler magazine in no time? I told you already I don't do erotica, and it has nothing to me.
I'm not interested in it, dude, get over it, if you want me to read your work and comment on your work, keep that in mind? But you can't just come over to a poem of mine that has nothing to do with you or her and start arguing with me about stuff that has nothing to do with me. Got that, you think I don't know what an internet whore is? I'm sick of it, so keep your and her sex lives out of my life, is that so complicated?
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Dude, are you deaf? I DON'T CARE, GET THE Buck OFF MY WORK!
I keep saying to you over and over again, go away, I'm not interested. Leave me alone, I don't care. What is up with you? How much more clearer can I make this for you? I'm not interested. Why on earth are you over here screwing up my songs comments talking about stuff that has nothing to do with my poem, but your stupid erotica crap that you keep trying to sell me on. I DON'T CARE!!!!!
Edited on Feb 17, 11:15 p.m. because ''. -
Yeah well this asshat and his internet whoring friend have been pestering the crap out of me, and I'm getting sick of it. Between her constantly soliciting me for sex, and his imaginery contest with me for of all things her honor? Whatever in the hell that means? I have enough losers like that hanging on me all day already, I don't need anymore, so I wish they would just get the hint and move on.
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sometimes it gets a bit scarey on here. so anyway i really liked this of course but then what do i know i hasten to add...i feel rather subdued after reading the comments above so i think i will just slope off quietly...nice write as usual
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I never said that, don't put words in my mouth. So if that's the case, why don't you go play with your cds, and get the Frickin frackelicious popping poo off of my art? How'd that be? And why hasn't it crossed your mind yet, that I'm not interested, I'm not competing with you, I don't give a Pigeon's penis. Are you Slow? What are you a Sycophant?
Edited on Feb 17, 9:26 p.m. because ''. -
Well, I tell you what's up with that?
That, would be internet whoring.
Which I consider a person who says
ridiculous sexual shit to you constantly
that has nothing to do with poetry.
Now, I don't know about you but when
a chick is pestering me with crap sexual
inuendos CONSTANTLY I call that internet
whoring, also, why are you over here bothering
me, don't you get the hint? I'm not interested
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Now how in the hell would they know that if they don't even know who in the hell Emit Till is? LMAO!!!! Can I get an Amen?
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You throw that word artist around pretty losely William.
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I like the song Horus. I wonder if people even know who Horus was and why the name is so befitting of your poetry and comments. LOL Keep sharing, good job, we won't let them ban you off the sight. You have a group of poets that respect the fact that you take freedom of expression, the 1st Amendment to it's height. *Break Barriers Baby!*
Lynnette
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i am mixed, everything under the sun i am a part of if you must know my tree then i'll tell you but it will take a while
Edited on Feb 17, 5:03 p.m. because ''. -
Please, if you don't know who Emit Till is honey, you'll never get this one. lol! I suggest you go back and do some studying. You always remind me of a Valley Girl high on mall shopping When you comment.
Earlier, you commented on my Emit Till Poem without even knowing who in the hell Emit Till is correct? Aren't you black?
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