I once knew everything around me
the air and the motion's were rich and free
the life was so special that we shared
my sister and me so leanly and shaved
we always got along and then she left
climbing through the year's like it was a shaft
my poor sister left
and everyone laughed
I miss her so much in this house
She left as quitely as a mouse
and the only one crying was me
What a weird dream
My sister leaving my side
Before that happen's wed have died.
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Excellent
A great poem that describes perhaps the leaving of someone who is close to you and the realisation that such a thing can happen so fast and so easily. As we grow up people close to us can become distant and the closeness once felt can disappear so very easily. Not sure exactly what you meant to say with this poem but that is at least what it stirred up inside me. Great write, keep it up!!!
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Thank's, it's my thought's on how my sister will be graduating high school soon and leaving our home, and leave me along with it.
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