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Debilynn, Devoted Friend

Dear debilynn
is my prized kin,
I know her well,
so I'll begin...

D evoted to her family and friends.
E ssential member of The Poetic Bandits.
B eautiful soul and heroic spirit, 
I treasure her as my Allpoetry sister.
L oves creatures great and small.
Y oung at heart, clever in thought.
N ice to mice and birdies too!
N ever says no to God.

There's so much more
we could explore
of debilynn,
(What, you want more?)

Suffice to say
she's a-okay
with paintball gun
(I've seen her play).

For debilynn
I shout HURRAY!





Author notes

debilynn - a woman of courage.

I made the background for you too, Sis.

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  • Wonderful Tribute!

    Debilynn is indeed a very special person, caring and sharing, an inspiration to me and all who know her! Very nicely written poem with the embedded Acrostic! Write On!

    Brother Dennis


  • Desire gold member
    January 30

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    Precious!!

    Oh My Word this is a Beauty for a Beautiful Spirit
    Love the energy You have brought forth also the message of Inspiration- Appreciation for this Gem Excellent dedication...
    Love the background for her too
    Adore this verse!!
    I so Thank You for commenting on my work
    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 30

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    She is certainly a woman of courage and strength, even if she doesn't herself know it. Another one I admire greatly, find true inspiration from, and look up to as a person. Wonderful tribute.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • debilynn gold member
    January 25

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    now you made me cry! thank you for this! i never expected this so it makes it twice as nice. you are so wonderful! thank you thank you thank you. i love you sis! you know me better than i thought you did. you are truly a great sister. again, thank you. God bless you always

  • goalsv
    January 25
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    Excellent build up for her, she is a great lady.


  • Mirthryl
    January 25

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    Lovely friendship and tribute poem! Excellent acrostic and nicely rhymed and metered pre- and post-commentaries!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 24

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    excellent~

    What a wonderful poem
    I know she will like it.......
    I sure have
    Best of luck in the contest
    I have up a new one too drop by
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

    Love the background to


  • peregrin
    January 24
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    This is so pretty, I love it...
    What a touching concept...

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