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Bemused

How ne'er confused
some people are,
I'll never understand.
For always, I am
quite bemused
of where I seem to land.
And in the middle
of discussions,
I'll lose what I have said;
Hmm. . .
Maybe I
should take up
writing poetry instead.

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So. . . any advice?? It's the first little jingle that my friend Candlewick and I came up with ^^ We think it's kinda cute, honestly ;D but don't pay any attention to us! lol!

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  • Sakka Seishin
    January 26

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    HOLY FUCK 'RIAH! Are you sure, a famous poet didnt write this or something? Really??

    *oozing with pride*

    This is so so so amazing! I love a lot of the word choice and how casual it seemed at times, then it got all "but seriously..." and it was serious.

    I think everyone has had or known an experience like this

    So..... whats his name...?

    Cal me when you getttt thiiissss
    (unless I call you first)

    ^_^