You are at such a distance long
Seperated by exciting sea, vast,
By land and mountains beautiful,
But you are so near and dear
In my heart beating in love clear
My sweet daughter cute and dear!
Think of me when your mind is free
Ink a word or two,send me your dream,
Say a word of love to your Dad so far!
Find time to read a line or two on A.P.
I posted, to know my loving heart
And feel free and treat me as Dad!
Share your sorrow and happiness!
I am for ever your Dad and glad
Praying God to bless you with bliss!
My kisses to you convey my blessings!
A contest entry
- I NEED AN AP BRO AND DAD by Girl-Interrupted.
875 points, ended February 2, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sweet, Everyone Deserves A Dad Like This
Love Always
Erica -
Awe, this is such a beautiful and loving piece. What a wonderful father to be there for his daughter no matter the distance or time.
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Awe... this is so sweet.
Everyone deserves a dad like this.
Delila
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nice
Its very good. True to the fact that daughters are special to their dads. -
Yes,daughters are special for Dads. I liked the subject. I tripped over line 4 in the second stanza and the last couple of lines. Other than that it flowed smoothly.
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this was such a sweet poem.
one thing i have to say is that the rhyming seems forced so it didnt flow as nice.
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Every girl needs a dad like you. I wish I had had one like you.
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you too are my daughter!
Thank you sweet daughter Marlboro, you too are my daughter. I will know about you from your page on the A.P. keep smiling my sweet Marlboro. -
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Thank you Daddy.
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oh this is so very sweet
so full of emotion
good and heartfelt write
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awww, i loved this poem! It almost brought tears to my eyes.... this is penned from someone who knows how to be a loving dad!
becc
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