Fermez les yeux
search inside,
be patient, you'll find
The Pathway Through The Looking Glass
[of your mind]
and
ESCAPE.
Author notes
I wanted to try incorporating my four years of french class into my poetry. haha.
Translations:
Si vous êtes patient, vous échapperez = If you're patient, you will escape.
Fermez les yeux = Close your eyes
yeah, this is a weird piece. Haha.
A contest entry
- Quckie♥ by Kathraina.
550 points, ended January 25, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What's your interpretation of the poem? What do you think of it overall?
Comments
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this is a weird and awesomely creative piece!
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Wow. Amazing.
I love the French you put in.
Wonderful work!
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WHOA
This is extremely beautiful!!! I love love love what you've done here! And the french incorporation is genius, and I love the stress on "ESCAPE" at the end. Magnificent piece! Thank you for entering and good luck! I really love this!
♥ Kathraina
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