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All We Have Is Words.

They share so much together.
All we have,
is words.
No memories,
of touch,
of us.
Just words.
I wonder why,
hes with me,
and not her.
Shes worth more,
of his time,
of his feelings,
of his life.
I just fade away,
into that backround-
As they talk,
laugh,
flirt.
They both know,
I can see it,
I notice it.
I hear it so much,
yet they continue.
Ignoring me,
and my grilfriend status.
It makes me sick.
As i watch,
I can feel and hear,
my heart ripping in two.
I want to cry,
I want to scream.
Yet i stay quiet,
because that could put him over the edge.
I could lose him,
forever..
But then again,
it could happen any minute.
Because THEY share so much together.
All we have,
is words..

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I wrote this a VERY long time ago, just quickly trying to get all some thoughts written down. Just came across it today and felt like posting it.

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  • sweetieforever
    January 27
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    awe

    carrie this is so sad


  • PANDAmonium
    January 25

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    My Darling Carrie,

    I know we talked about this poem last night but I feel the need to reiterate what I said. I would never leave you for another. I couldn't. You are all that I am. Leaving you would be like leaving a part of myself.

    The person who this is about, we could never be together. And I'm sorry if I have ever done anything in the past to hurt you. I have never wanted to hurt you.

    I love you Carrie. If I had a choice of loving you, or breathing, I would use my last breath to say I love you. You are my everything. I wake up each morning with your strength by my side. You;re the reason I keep living. *kisses you* I love you Carrie. Never forget that.

    Forever Yours,
    Justin


    • FearlessChic
      January 26
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      SURE, get me all teary eyed

      That was adorable and I love you too Justin. Thanks again. <3<3<3


  • Mrs. Mautino
    January 24

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    Hi Care Bear! Remember me? (It's okay if you don't XD ) First off, I like poems like these because while they are blunt, they're still true and not based on some fake emotions. Just because a poem has pretty words in it, doesn't mean you felt what you just wrote down. Anyway, I hope you don't think this anymore, a guy is with you because he loves you, even with the distance. Hey, if he's with you with distance, that just shows just how much he truly loves you Hope that helped XD Talk to you soon!

    • FearlessChic
      January 24
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      I do remember you lol. No worries about that. I don't feel this way at all, but still wanted to post it, just so its not laying around my room anymore lol. Justin and I have had our speed bumps in our relationship, but we always have and always will get past them. Thanks for the comment <3

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