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Gianna Taryn

                     

Gianna Taryn looked up from sifting the potato patch for missed morsels to watch the squadron limping home. She would need to wash before milking the goats again, and checking the cheeses to see if any were fit to eat. She never got used to turnips and cheese, preferring potatoes, so she vigorously pumped the hoe, having learned to live mostly on hope.

Things were tight in the rural French village. The men were mostly gone; killed in the fighting or conscripted  by the occupational troops to work in the factories in Germany. Many families, sisters and moms did the laundry of the American fliers at Laon to the east, and offered other services as well, mending and trading. All the clean uniforms were neatly folded in tied paper, with the names, ranks and serial numbers face up alphabetically.

Maybe Roe Bear (Robert) would bring chocolates when he claimed his uniforms. He was her favorite; the family adopted him. Even grandpa adored him. He had his own clothes, slept in the barn on leave, earning his keep cutting wood and mending fences and passed for a local in trips to the local market, with quick ear for their Patois.

Gia counted the B-26s, fourteen, instead of the eighteen that had taken off three hours ago. Maybe Roe bear is missing, fear flooding her soul. The Americans, one at a time pealed off and flew nose down in an alarming speed to flare only at the last moment to puffs of smoke burned off the rubber tires. The big powerful engines spit and popped as the power was pulled back and the planes rumbled as they taxied to their revetments. One plane left... circled the field, crossing low over head with its nose wheel only partially extended, she could read the nose art. "Mag the Bag", Roe Bear's plane, was in trouble. Dropping the hoe, Gianna began "Our Fathers" and "Hail Mary's," clutching and kissing the small crucifix around her neck. Mag the Bag's front undercarriage straitened, and she gently touched down, bouncing back into the air for one more circuit. When she touched down again, she didn't slow like the others, the engines sang a different song, and running out of pierced steel plank runway sank in the soft soil beyond, tail higher in the air. The men jumped out of holes, and ran away, but she didn't burn. "Thank you, savior..." Gia breathed.

Roe Bear arrived with the sundown on a bicycle with a duffel bag strapped to the handlebars. He bounded up the steps, passing out parcels, canned spam, chocolates and silk from discarded old parachutes." Mag stubbed her toes pretty bad this time. While they repair her, we have a couple of days off. The lead navigator made a mistake, and brought us in over the synthetic fuel factory right over the worst flak. I lost both of my wing men. We counted over forty holes and lost the hydraulics ,and brakes, which kept us hand cranking down the wheels, and we could only slow by reversing the pitch of the propellers. An eighty eight went through the side nine inches from my head without detonating. I volunteered to climb out on the catwalk to crank the bomb bay doors closed without a parachute, which made the cranking impossible. The aerilon cable was cut by flak, and jammed forcing us into a dive. I had to jump back into the back of the plane, and hit my forehead on the foot of Gregory's turret. I almost broke my glasses, and I have a large bump."

"I saw your plane in trouble, and prayed for you. It frightens me to know you are in such danger..." Gianna replied.

"I know I am coming home. I am not afraid. God reassured me I would be able to take care of Virginia, my wife..."

  " All the excitement wore me out, and I think I'll turn in after dinner.  I thought I could raise the wall of the pig pen higher tomorrow. I need to collect my uniforms, the squadron is moving in a few days to be closer to the front.  I will miss all of you, my dear friends..."

Under the moon light Gianna crept out to the barn. She settled onto the hay to be near Roe Bear, and with fingertip began to trace his face. His nose and chin, eyebrows and lips. He awoke with a start, and asked, "What are you doing, Gia?"

" I want one more thing from you before you go. Someone to remember you by..."

"But Gia. I am married! I could never do such a thing!"

Please Roe Bear... It would bring me such joy..."

" It is not mine to give. And my name is Glen. I've told you before..."

"But your uniforms all say Robert!"

"They make us use our first names. I hate mine. I like my middle name- Glen."

"Please, I'll even call him Glen..."

"Gia, you are only eighteen. You have your whole life ahead of you. It will be hard enough as it comes. I don't think you thought this through."

"But Roe Bear, I did think about it. And it is not uncommon here."

When he was eighty, Roe Bear returned to the village. He asked if any knew Gianna Taryn, and found her stone house near the bakery. Second wife in tow, he knocked on the door. Gia answered the door with sadness. "You are too late... I am too old now..." Recognizing the face she once traced with her finger in the hay.

Author notes

Gianna Taryn

Robert Glen died two years ago. I have a picture of him from the visit with two of the french women from his 'adopted' family near Laon. One of whom I have named Gia, here. He told me the story, with shock at the loose morals of the french. I wonder if father ever even noticed her compliment...

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  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 20

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    How wonderful they both must have been. I think it is touching that she asked him to make love to her, to give her a child. A different world, a different time. You wrote this story beautifully.

    Love,
    CM


  • TerriMac gold member
    October 4
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    oh wow

    What a beautiful touching read - that surely has the makings of a book in there - what a tender story beautifully told


  • myrataal silver member
    March 29

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    How captivating and how beautiful you write ...

    I must admit, I have mixed feelings for Gianna Taryn. And great admiration for Robert Glen. And sadness for the ending.

    And: it is never too late for love. But I understand the need to be to the beloved perfection of beauty ... It is a passion in the heart of most women: to gift Master and love ... with timelessness.

    Ah, please write more ... and yes: a publication. A legacy.



    Love
    Myra


  • Wandika gold member
    February 21
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    Excellent!

    Very authentic depictions of aviation systems. A well done story as I thought it too short.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 7

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    This was a good read and you didn't have the easiest of name choices. Great imagery and story.

    Sue x


  • ourgirlFriday
    February 7

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    Interesting adaptation of the story; names for the countries are askew - but the storyline is perfect; you should publish this on Storywrite!


  • michichoeret
    January 25
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    so true

    bloody obviously so


    • deercatcher
      January 31
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      I have finished my story, if you would like to visit again, Michi...

    • deercatcher
      January 25
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      I have it on good authority. 5-7 cups of cabbage, cauliflower or broccoli a week, lots of cinnamon in the diet and chromium supplements.
      It was in the context of the growing ill health concerning weight, diabetes and such. I ask if it was for maintenence, or repair and he said both. Do you have controll over your diet? I was in israel 26 years ago. I was in country when they used f-16s to blow the Osiris nueclear facility in Iraq. I stayed 10 days and the diet was so different. Probably alot better for one, though. I liked the felafals sp? and got used to eating bread and cucumbers for breakfast. I am ripping on kRomeo andJuliet- Would a rose by any other name smell so sweet? waiting for my assignment for the contest. Nice of you to notice. Best to you.


  • ourgirlFriday
    January 24
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    you tell me...

    Name: Gianna Taryn

    Please observe rule #2!

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