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In The Still



Still
the calmness of the days end
I wait
the phone will ring, inbox alert me, you will arrive
Essence in the still

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 23

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    This really made me think of how you wait for someone to come back to your life who has been gone. What you're waiting for is the return that you know will never come.

    I love you, always

    Shari


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 10

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    One of these days I will be in the still to meet you and your hubby some time. I've only been talking about it for a couple of years now(lol). I do hope all is going well with you as I know you have alot on your plate. Glad to see you being creative and finding a release for others to cherish.

    Ted E


  • poetryality silver member
    February 5

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    The "still" of the night makes quiet noises. We hear them in their faint effort to steal our solitude, our solace, I feel these words dear sister/friend. I feel them as we speak.


    All My LOVE ♥

    Renee


  • faderman1959
    January 25

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    The quiet waiting! Most difficult of things to do, Such agony! This is what I took from this. Its one of those poems that I think are percieved from a personal level and open to interpretation. Alot said in so few words!


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    January 24

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    great stuff

    You captured it well, the every essence of sitting in quiet and loneliness and just waiting for that thing that never seems to come. Great job my friend, Mark

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